Mountain View

by Lara
(Calgary)

Tall and Majestic

Tall and Majestic

As a music educator, I would not have chosen this as an advertisement for lessons. I would have displayed either the title of the music school or the instructor's name, and then their specialty area (cello, string instruments, Suzuki method....).


I would then mention trial workshops and lesson rates. Maybe have some pictures or testimonials.

I like the addition of the map. The web addresses should be hyperlinks. There just isn't any structure to this page and it has poor flow.

Barry's Response - It's a listing of various cello teachers around town, as found in the local phone book. The map was inserted to fit the theme of the website.

Thanks, for letting me know, though.

Click here to post comments

Join in and write your own page! It's easy to do. How? Simply click here to return to Gotta be Perfect.